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In recent years, more and more international students come to Australia TO SEEK higher education. However, there are many challenges FOR THOSE STUDENTS especially TO ADJUST to a new academic culture. This essay will talk about three main DIFFERENT AREAS FROM style, assessment system TO educational background then some advice to help those students overcome the difficulties.

One of the main problems for international student is about the thinking style. THAT a Japanese student who studied well in Tokyo but failed in his essay in Australia can be taken as a good example. The teacher wanted students to compare and analyseS the similarities and differences between two person’s views. Unfortunately, although the Japanese student introduced lots of details about their background and personal life, his summary was so brief that there WAs no comment in his essay. (Ballard & Clanchy 1984). It is clear that the Japanese student still insisted IN writing IN his old thinking style. T