还不错，你英语还蛮好的，不过就是文章太长了，又不够简洁，有些词我没见过，所以不太懂你在写什么？

It is not too bad, your English is good, but your article is too long and not compact, even some of the words I had never seen,so I am not clear what your wrote.

Well done,your English skill is OK,Yet your article is too long and not so clear to be understood.I haven`t known some words in it ,therefore I can hardly understand what you write