看看英语作文有没有错误

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/07/04 06:15:16
Mrs Green is our English teacher.She has taught in our school for over five years.When we in trouble,(当我们陷入困境时),She always ready help(她经常热心帮忙).Now,Teachers' Day will come,everybody is reckoning what presents will give her.Sun will send her a card,Yu will send her lots of beautiful flowers.I'm going to send some photos taken about her hometown--Jiangsu when the teachers' day come.I visited Jiangsu during the summer holidays,It's very beautiful,I think my presents is the best.

has been teaching
When we in trouble
主语后面不能直接加介词修饰,要加are in troble
构成系表
她经常热心帮忙
可以这样翻译:She is a warm-hearted woman
Now,Teachers' Day will come(其实用is coming更好)
presents will give her(东西不是人,what presents she will receive)
the teachers' day come(加s)

总结:写的不错,再接再厉!!

When we in trouble,(当我们陷入困境时),She always ready help(她经常热心帮忙)
when we are in troble,she always comes to help us with
warm-hearted