看看这个英语句子有没有错 文1

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/27 18:09:24
Playing sports is good for health. For the first，do some exercise can improve your immunity。second，do exercise can make your body much more stronger. When you complete the movement, for example after play the basketball or play the soccer, you can have plant the very joyful feeling. therefore third, the movement lets the human have the joyful mood.

play有没有用对？还是应该改成 plays ?
feeling 有没有用对？
therefore 有没有用对？
有没有其他的错误.

改正后的
Doing sports is good for health. First，do some exercise can improve your immunity。Second，do exercise can make your body much more stronger. When you complete the activities, for example after playing basketball or soccer, you can have a very joyful feeling. therefore , the exercise lets the human beings have a joyful mood.

sports are good for health.Firstly, do some sports can strengthen your body and improve your immunity.secondlly,it can make us feel happy,for example,after playing basketball or football,we felt emormously comfortable and relieved,the stress was no longer existed. what's more ,do sports can help us make more friends.
我从整体上改了一下,感觉你所列的三个原因逻辑不是很好~比如,使身体变强壮和免疫力增强应该是同一个意思,不能别列成两条~

错误很多啊，
1.for the frist 的用法不对，没有这种用法，直接用first就可以
2.do some exercises用复数
3.much more stronger不对，much stronger就可以了，不能加more
4.complete不合适，应该用finish
5.“for example after play--soccer”有两句错误，after是介词不能直接加动词原形，加动名词，playing。还有就是球类运动前不加the，play th