这个英语句子有何问题???

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/30 13:52:14
The man,who keeping his mind to cut down the pollution of water and air is the boss of the factory .

(工厂老板保证减少水和空气的污染.)

这个句子成分有没有问题???

多了who,少个“，”
the man,keeping his mind to..., is the boss of the factory.
主体成分是：the man is the boss...
中间的是修饰the man(keep his mind to是the man自己发出的动作，所以用主动ing形式）

这句话的正确表达是：The man,keeping his mind on cutting down the pollution of water and air ,is the boss of the factory.