这么说对么???????

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/07/12 10:34:57
But today computer technology's development has realized in a very friendly interactive teaching environment that is taking the network as a central of the computer multimedia technologies supported.
我给改成这样了..... 你们看看是不是好一点儿比刚才?
But today computer technology's has realized in a very friendly teaching environment, which is taking the network as a central of the computer multimedia technology.
谢谢!!!!!!!!!!!!!

能够使用短句的就不要用长句。言简意赅是语言最重要的表达原则。希望你能将这句话分开几句来表达。

如果你认为说的过去的话,请你解释一下这个长句的意思吧。

应该改成这样:
Realizes that it is a very friendly interactive teaching environment today, the development of the computer technology has taken the network as a central of the computer multimedia technologies supported.

好长的句子啊,一个标点也没吗?我认为还可以说得过去,不过有点中国英语的感觉。

看不太懂啊楼主。
你想说的中文是什么?