帮忙做一下,下面的短文改错。(每行一个)
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例:disappointing改disappoined. 若是没有错的,就不用改了。谢谢~!~!
i went fishing with my father on last Sunday.
We started at daybreak.
Not long we came to a stream with clean water,that we could see fish swimming.
It's a good place for fishing.
After a little minutes' preparation,we sat down and began fishing.
An hour was passed,but I didn't get a single fish.
I felt very disappointing.
I often lifted the fishing rod,because I almost lose my patience.
On the other side of the stream,my father had got lots of fish.
I went up to him and asked for some advices.
In the end,with help I got some fish,too.
How happy I was!
2#总体不错,可能是我没说清楚,你说的第2个错和第3个错是在同一行上,所以只能改一个。
1. i went fishing with my father last Sunday.-去掉on,last Sunday,the day before yesterday之类的词前面不用加介词。
2.Not long we came to a stream with clean water,which we could see fish swimming. -用逗号隔开的定语从句不能用that,只能用which。
3.It was a good place for fishing. -上下文时态保持一致(过去时)。
4.After a few minutes' preparation,we sat down and began fishing.-minute可数用few。
5.An hour passed,but I didn't get a single fish. -pass本身就表示时间流逝,不需要用被动态。
6.I felt very disappointed.-这个你已经知道了。
7.I often lifted the fishing rod,because I almost lost my patience. -上下文时态一致。
8.I went up to him and asked for some advice. -advice不可数名词,不能加s。
9.In the end,with his help I got some fish,too. -根据上下文,应该是在父亲的帮助下钓到了鱼。不加his指代不明。
累死我了,想当年我可是短文改错好手啊!
第一个去掉 on
第三个that换为where
第四个去掉a
第五个little换为few
第六个去掉was
第七个disappointing换为disappointed
第八个lose换为lost