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帮帮改改，加分的说，呵呵，当然要认真点的，主要改语法就行了，尤其长句偶不太会写，着重帮忙看下

a short essay on the topic of students selectiong their lecturers
1有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师
2学生选择教师时所考虑的主要因素
3学生自选任课教师的益处和可能产生的问题
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Nowdays, universities in a increasing number offer their students an opportunity to select the tutor of their lectures. As a matter of fact, the determine which interests sudents has caught the national wide attention.

The following factors will be contemplated by the students. The first reason, also as the emphasis, is the fame of the teacher. A teacher of some repute is popular than others. The repute is based on his moral and broad knowledge. What's more, the choise is decided by the students' preference. Last but not the least, the pracitcality of the lecture is also an critical fact.

Students selecting their lectures is benefical to the schools' prospect. The staff should improve the

你写的非常差。。我只给你改了你写的，没加句子。给你几点建议：
1. 不要用你不会用的词
2. 不要写作文的时候根据中文意思来查英文，全用错了，很坏的习惯
3. 写的太短了， 这也是英文水平低的原因，我把你写的改了下，就变成3句话了。。每段是一句，内容实在太少了
4.结构不行，连总结都没有，你不能光把3条中文翻译完就不管了，要继续写啊，比如最后写段自己对这个事情的看法建议之类的
5. 写完最少要改一遍
Nowadays, there is an increasing trend that some universities provide students opportunities to select tutors due to students' willings which is regarded as a national wide problem.

Students are interested in the factors as following. Firstly, the emphasis is the level of tutors while famous totur will be more popular. On the other hand, choises are based on the sudents' preferences. Finally, the practical value of the lecture is the pacing factor.

It has a positive effect that it is benefical for schools' developing while this rule might creates losses of staffs and they should improve themselves constantly.

6年级的看不懂 你大学的吧 我是小学

典型的汉语式英语！