帮我改下我的英文写作?

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不同点
1。加拿大学生可以自由选择科目,加拿大大学没有中国大学那种统一的教学计划,他们的学生可以随时改变他们所学的科目,而中国学生不可以。
2。加拿大学生不盲目追求高学历,这体现了加拿大人没有中国人十分普遍的观念,“好学”就一直读下去。加拿大学生一般都是在自己知道要学什么再学什么,而中国学生更多的是听从父母的意见。
3。加拿大学生实践的机会比中国学生多,加拿大学校提倡学在社会中,而中国学生对理论的学习比较多。
4。社会文化不一样决定了两地大学文化的差异,加拿大学生比较容易从社会中得到活动经费,而中国社会不提倡学生在毕业前走上社会,而是希望他们在学校接受更多的教育,提高文化素质。
Differences
1. The first difference between chinese college from canadian college is chose program. Canadian students are free to choose their subjects, but chinese university has unity of teaching programe and chinese students can not change their school subjects by themselves.
2. The sencond difference between chinese college from canadian college is academic treatment. Canadian students are not blind pursuit of high academic qualifications, which reflects the Chinese and Canadians were not very common sense, Canadian students always know what they need to learn, unlike the more of Chinese students to follow their parents opinion.
3.. Canadian studen

我今天要睡觉了 不能看了 问题别关哦 明天继续看
我说的不一定全对 但是有几个建议
要注意平行结构
比较级 比较级对象要对等
连接词多用but nevertheless和although 等表示转折 because/since/so 表示因果 其他的少用
,不能连接两个单句
between and 把from 换掉
be 后面不能加动词 连动错误
注意逻辑主语 还有就是不要用复杂句式

1.Canandian Students can choose their subjects freely.Unlike Chinses colleges,Canadian colleges don't have a unified instruction program,so Candain students can change their program anytime,while Chinese students can not do that.
2. Canadian students are not blind pursuit of high academic qualifications,which reflects the Chinese and Canadians were not very common sense.Canadian students always know what they need to learn, but Chinese students are more like to follow their parents suggestion.
3. Canadian students has more opportunity to practice than Chinese students has, Canada schools advocate student learning in the society, but the Chinese schools encourge thieur students to learn more theory.
4.Different soci