帮我修改下英文作文..十分感谢.

小弟初到国外..生物课要交报告...高人们能不能帮忙修改下语法错误.谢谢了....
Genus Gorilla is the largest living primate on the earth. There are two species in genus Gorilla, Western gorilla (Gorilla gorilla) and Eastern Gorilla (Gorilla beringei). Both are inhabited in the jungle of Africa, all gorillas are herbivore. Gorilla and chimpanzee are the closest evolutionary relative animal to human. The DNA ofgenus Gorilla is 92%–98% identical to a human. Gorilla society is generally leaded by males, a gorilla troop usually consist of a dominant silverback, several adult females, and their immature offspring (Claudio et al 2008).

We have three different articles which focus on three different research areas about gorilla, first, the interaction between each group member. Second, the imitation skill of gorillas, did Juvenile learn complex skill from other adult gorilla. Third, the nutritional quality of gorilla, how did the difference of age, sex, and season affect on the nutritional quality of a group of

额~对不起，我只是 初中生而已，不过你可以上一些网站去寻求答案，或问问老师，请外教就ok了〉
实在是帮不上什么忙了。

错误比较多 看我帮你改的吧 有些括号被我删了 你再改改上去
Gorilla is the largest primate life on Earth. There are two types of gorilla, the western and eastern gorilla gorilla. This is living in the jungles of Africa, gorillas are all plant-eating animals. Gorillas and chimpanzees are the closest human animal. Gorilla 92% -98% of the same gene a person. Gorilla community's lead men, usually by the force gorilla head of a gorilla, several adult females and their immature offspring (Claudio et al 2008).

We have three different terms, to focus on three different studies in the field of gorillas, first of all, the interaction between the members of each group. Second, the gorilla imitation skills, but the way young people learn complex skills from other adult gorillas. Third, the nutritional quality of the gorillas, how to distinguish between age, sex, season, nutrition affect the quality of a group of gorillas.