大家帮我把这段英文缩短

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/07/04 11:43:32
这是我期末考的一篇作文,可是太长了很难背,希望哪位高手能帮我缩短下,谢谢!!!
My View of College Life
There are mainly two types of students you are very likely to meet in any university:one type likes to be engaged in all kinds of social activities while the other is reluctant to do so beacuse they want to spend more time on their studies.Concerning the first type of sutdent,they believe that by getting involved in social or business activites,they can gain insights into some things a textbook could never teach them.And the skills and experience they obtain during the work will be of benefit to them in their future career.
However,for sudents who intent to be indulged in their studies,academic work is of utmost importance.They maintain that the chief and the only obligation for a sutdent is to study.Therefore,they treasure the four years of their university life and try to make full use of it.
I am in favour of taking a part-time job. I don't think taking a part-time job will waste m

Mainly, there are two types of students in any kinds of university. One are those who engages in all kinds of social activities while another is not (since they want to spend more time on studying).The former group believe that by doing so they can gain insights into things not in the text books,(also benefit from the skills anf experience obtain from work.) However,students who doubt this opinion think that study in the university is the most important (bacause students are obliged to study.) As a result, they work hard and make full use of 4-years study.
I am with the former group of people because taking a part-time job will not waste my time but develop my personality totally, (and also, it helps us to adapt working environment easily in the future.) If I could make choice,I would take a part-time job rather than full-time study.

还需要在缩短的话, 括号里的可以删