UC知道高手来修改英文文章语法错误（2）
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Moreover, as a member of student union, I was elected as the Director of Sports Department in 2005. In the activities that I planned the one of worth mentioning is that I carried out the evaluation using mathematical method of Probability and Statistics taught in college on the campus basketball league we planed, and originally issued the campus basketball lottery. Finally we sold 400 pieces of lottery and got 500 yuan RMB of pure profit. And all the proceeds were donated to the charity.
In 2007 I passed the selection and joined the volunteer ranks of the Shanghai Special Olympic Game and the Women's Football World Cup. Through these experience, especially in Special Olympic Game, I raise my oral English level perceptibly and learn how to communicate with people from other cultures. In fact, I found that only if one have a respectful and friendly heart, he can get along with any people well in this world!
As for my interests and loves literature, music, touri
In 2007 I passed the selection and joined the volunteer ranks of the Shanghai Special Olympic Game and the Women's Football World Cup. Through these experience, especially in Special Olympic Game, I raise my oral English level perceptibly and learn how to communicate with people from other cultures. In fact, I found that only if one have a respectful and friendly heart, he can get along with any people well in this world!
As for my interests and loves literature, music, touri
student union-students' union
the one of worth mentioning is-the one of worth mentions was
Probability and Statistics -Probability Statistics
basketball league - Basketball League
In 2007 I passed the selection -In 2007 I passed the election
these experience-these experiences
I raise my oral English level perceptibly and learn how to communicate with people from other cultures.-raised,learnt.
only if one have-only if one has
get along with any people well -get along well with any people
I wish I could have the honor to joining you soon and proving my value to you as a qualified student today, and as a pride-taking alumnus tomorrow. -join,prove
基本的都改了~
that I planned the one of “organized” is better