英语作文 高手帮忙，急求啊

翻译：

在福建，我认为最好的地方就是吉祥山。
In Fujian, I think the best place is auspicious Hill.

因为我们八中就坐落在这座美丽的山上！
Because we have eight sits in the beautiful mountains!

最近学校周围新建了许多大厦。
Recently, a number of schools around the new building.

校门前的马路也在扩建。
The road in front of the school's expansion also.

我相信，在不久的将来学校附近会变的更繁华。
I believe that in the near future in the vicinity of schools will become more prosperous.

而我们的吉祥山也会更加的美丽。
Hill's good fortune and we will be more beautiful.

全文：

In Fujian, I think the best place is auspicious Hill.Because we have eight sits in the beautiful mountains!Recently, a number of schools around the new building.The road in front of the school's expansion also.I believe that in the near future in the vicinity of schools will become more prosperous.Hill's good fortune and we will be more beautiful.

满意给个分 谢~