UC知道六级作文！急啊！
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周末就考了，心里没底啊，自己试着写了一篇，大家看看怎么样？能打几分？能过吗？
Will E-books Replace Traditional Books?
1.随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多；
2.有人认为电子图书将会取代传统图书，理由是…
3.我的看法。
Will E-books Replace Traditional Books?Everyone has his own opinion.
The majority idividuals take the attitude that papery books will only exist in human's memery in the future.They argue that with the development of morden science and technology ,e-books will be the most prevalent form for reading.In other words,the e-books will be take the place of traditional books.
On the contrary,several folks are opposed to that,they emphasize that today's youngs are not what they were.The desire of kids to play electric production grows very fast.If let them use e-books instand of papers,they would drop their studying.Since trdational books have their own characters that can't be substituted by e-books.
There is a lot to be said for both side on the controvasy.But from my
Will E-books Replace Traditional Books?
1.随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多；
2.有人认为电子图书将会取代传统图书，理由是…
3.我的看法。
Will E-books Replace Traditional Books?Everyone has his own opinion.
The majority idividuals take the attitude that papery books will only exist in human's memery in the future.They argue that with the development of morden science and technology ,e-books will be the most prevalent form for reading.In other words,the e-books will be take the place of traditional books.
On the contrary,several folks are opposed to that,they emphasize that today's youngs are not what they were.The desire of kids to play electric production grows very fast.If let them use e-books instand of papers,they would drop their studying.Since trdational books have their own characters that can't be substituted by e-books.
There is a lot to be said for both side on the controvasy.But from my
我的意见是：
1、开头最好不要用题目。这是第一印象，写好第一句话很重要。
2、The majority idividuals应改为The majority of people，或者改为Some people
3、摆双方观点的语句最好短一些，因为考官最想看的是陈述你的观点。可以用“some...some...”句型。
4、from my perspective和I prefer重复。
5、结尾收得不好，建议修改。
这篇文章的优点是：词汇用得比较好。有些地方我觉得还不错，学到东西了。可以在此基础上注意一下词性的变化，这样会为文章增色不少。
我个人意见，希望对楼主有用。
好呀!
可以过