有没有英文写作高手啊，救命啊

这是一篇求职信，不是简介，不过信里这个人也是学计算机方面的，你自己凑和着改一改啦，：
My name is Guo Hang. Your advertisement for a Network Maintenance Engineer in the Student Daily interested me bacause the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am seeking.

According to the advertisement, your position requires top university, Bachelor or above in Computer Science or equivalent field and proficient in Windows NT4.0 and LINUX System. I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements. I will be graduating from XXXXXXXX University this year with a Bechelor degree. My studies have included courses in computer control and management and I designed a control simulation system developed with Microsoft Visual InterDev and SQL Server. Besides that, my interests also focus on electronic-bisiness. And i have several occupational E-business experiences with xxxxxxxxxx。

During my education, I have grasped the principals of my major and skills of practice. Not only have I passed