下面有两篇英语作文！！硪想请大家帮硪看看＠看一下哪里有错误？

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第一篇：
Amy is going to have a busy weekend.On Saturday,she is going to the shoe store buy a pair of sneakers.Then,she is going to visit her grandparents. After lunch ,she is going to the cinema with her mother.They are going to by bus. On Sunday .She is going to clean the room.After cleaning ,she is going to play tennis with John,they are will be fun!
This is Amy's weekend plans.What about you!

第二篇：
I have a very lovely sister !Her name is Alice.She is years old.She has long hair,two big eyes,she is very thin.Her hobby is reading comic book.Every evening,she watches cartoons on TV.She goes to school on foot every day.On weekend,in the afternoon ,she likes flying kites at the park.She flying kite looks very cute!
This is my sister.I love my sister very much!

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第一篇：
Amy is going to have a busy weekend.On Saturday,she is going to the shoe store to buy a pair of sneakers.Then,she is going to visit her grandparents. After lunch ,she is going to the cinema with her mother.They are going to take a bus. On Sunday .She is going to clean the room.After cleaning ,she is going to play tennis with John,they will have a great time.
This is the plan of Amy's weekend .What about you?

第二篇：
I have a very lovely sister !Her name is Alice.She is (没有写几岁）years old.She has long hair,big eyes,she is very thin.Her hobby is reading comic books.Every evening,she watches cartoons on TV.She goes to school on foot every day.In the afternoon of weekends ,she likes flying a kite in the park.She looks very cute when she flying the kite.
This is my sister.I love my sister very much!

Amy is going to have a busy weekend.On Saturday,she is going to the shoe store buy a pair of sneakers.Then,she is going to visit her grandparents