自己写了个小短文，错误多多，麻烦大家帮忙改改错。谢谢！！！

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I'm a freshman. Topic of conversation that i will talk about university education today.When i aready graduated from highschool,i will have a lot of choices to the future.Look for a job to go and earn many money;study in university going to get a higher degree,;even join the army.But Ihave studied in university,this is same as the most people.Why is this?

Because the college education is not only preparation for a careet, it is also preparation for life. The college education may help you even more understand world . let the life be richer, the field of vision is more open.

looks like those words, The more you learn,the more you earn. Not only obtains the money
我是一个大一生。今天我想谈谈大学教育的话题。当我高中毕业后，我对未来有很多选择：找一份工作去挣很多钱，上大学去得到更高的学历，甚至是去参军。但我和大多数人一样选择了上大学。这是为什么？
因为大学教育并不仅仅是为职业做准备，同时还是为生活做准备。大学教育可以让你更加了解这个世界和自己，让生活更加丰富，眼界更加开阔。
就像那句话，学得越多，得到的越多。不仅仅是得到金钱

我自己认真完善的，希望你满意~~~~~~~~

I'm currently a freshman. The topic that I want to talk about today is education at university . When graduated from middle highschool, I had adead of me many a choice for the future: either Looking for a job to make lots of money, going to college for a higher degree,or even joining the military service. Eventually , I chose to be a student in this university, just like most of us . Why is that ?

One reason is that college education is not only the preparation for future careers, but also it prepare us for the rest of our lives.
Secondly , college education may contribute to a good understanding of the world as well as ourselves, adding spice to life, enriching our horizon ,and broaden our visions .

As the saying goes , "the more you learn, the more you earn" - and they are more than just money

不如你发个中文的，帮你写吧。这恐怕得“洗心革面”了

I'm a freshman. Topic of conversation that i will talk about is today