UC知道请英语超人帮我看看英文简历。。。
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1994/06——2000/06 Pingshan Street Primary School of Tianjin City
2000/08——2003/08 Tonglou Middle School of Tianjin City
2003/09——2008/09 Sino-German vacational Trainning Centre of Tianjin City
Practice experience
2006——2007 The net school of 101 of Tianjin.
2007——2008 Sunspr Advertising Co.,Ltd of Tianjin.
The level of foreign language
English CET-4
The degree of computer
Be familiar with network,and have good computer knowledge,can skilled Office softwares in common use.
Self-assessment
Have a bright and cheerful disposition, positive upwards, diligent and eager to learn knowledge, the learning ability is relatively strong; Can take the interests of the whole into account, possess the spirit of cooperation of the group.
这是其中一部分也是我最没根的，麻烦您帮我看看，有没有语法方面白痴的错误，或是能用更优的单词代替更好。因为要给外企看 所以我很重视，谢谢您的帮忙。
对了以下是我的相对的中文简历 给您参考：
教 育 情
1.can skilled Office softwares in common use
语法有问题的，建议：skillful in Office softwares
2.Have a bright and cheerful disposition, positive upwards, diligent and eager to learn knowledge, the learning ability is relatively strong; Can take the interests of the whole into account, possess the spirit of cooperation of the group.
建议：Have a bright and cheerful disposition, a positive upwards attitude. Also diligent and eager to learn knowledges; the learning ability is relatively strong; always put the collective interests at the first and possess the spirit of group cooperation.
感觉你的措辞比较啰嗦不简明不地道，有些地方有语法错误，主谓关系混乱。
Be familiar with network,and have good computer knowledge
本人只是个大一英语专业学生~略有建议
Be familiar with the network and have a good knowledge of computer.
后面的句子can skilled Office softwares in common use.有点赘余~
个人意见嘿嘿~
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上面那个人的回答更改我觉得很不错了啊~是英语小强啊~哈~