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Dishonest tradesman in life
It is true that tradesmen always are dishonest in business .
My father is also a businessmen ,but in my eyes businessmen are not the men who intend
to cheat people to obtain huge benefits.
I went out of the school and saw a little street vendor who sold seals yesterday.
I was attracted by the old stone. I determined to buy one when the vendor showed me the price 6 yuan.
I picked one of them,. Ok , no bad .I would buy this one in my hand.
The vendor performed his professional skills during engraving the stone
I was so absorbed .so I asked him something about the art .he replied me very kindly.
He told me that this was pure handmade product and charged me 6 yuan per letter.
He also explained that other businessmen would ask me more than 48 yuan.,he just asked the
Price by 50%. My god! this was obviously cheating behavior ! fuck !
I decided to reveal him ,but I did not.
There were many reasons., f
It is true that tradesmen always are dishonest in business .
My father is also a businessmen ,but in my eyes businessmen are not the men who intend
to cheat people to obtain huge benefits.
I went out of the school and saw a little street vendor who sold seals yesterday.
I was attracted by the old stone. I determined to buy one when the vendor showed me the price 6 yuan.
I picked one of them,. Ok , no bad .I would buy this one in my hand.
The vendor performed his professional skills during engraving the stone
I was so absorbed .so I asked him something about the art .he replied me very kindly.
He told me that this was pure handmade product and charged me 6 yuan per letter.
He also explained that other businessmen would ask me more than 48 yuan.,he just asked the
Price by 50%. My god! this was obviously cheating behavior ! fuck !
I decided to reveal him ,but I did not.
There were many reasons., f
以下为个人观点,仅供参考:
I went out of the school and saw a little street vendor who sold <selling or sell>seals yesterday.
see sb. do sth/ see sb. doing sth
I was attracted by the old stone.改成the old stones
this似乎应改为that
以下简略:
I was so absorbed that I asked him something about the art.
There were many/two reasons.
I was shame(n.)/ashamed to quarrel with him.
通常用lose face不用lose faces
I am stay in the school all days.去掉am
I suppose that I am away from the dirty society and dirty things.
虚拟语气.would be away from
But the result is that I had been wrong.was/is wrong或the result was
I analysed my faults and found the answer.
whether it is worth buying/to buy