帮我看看怎么样改进我的译法

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/07/15 18:14:14
在这样的背景下,世界银行对福州市区轨道交通网络的规划布局及轨道交通网络对土地利用开发规划的影响研究给予支持。

Under such a background, the world banks offer their supports to the layout planning of track transportation network in Fuzhou and the research of land exploitation and utilization planning.

In such underground, the World Bank will support the study of the layout and the effect for land exploitation on track transportation network in the downtown of Fuzhou.
翻译要足够简洁,符合英语习惯,不是一个词一个词的翻译。

Against this background, the World Bank on Fuzhou rail transit network planning and rail transport network development plan of the land use impact studies to support it.

Against such a background, the World Bank offers their support to the layout planning of track transportation network in Fuzhou and the research of land exploitation and utilization planning.

Under such a background太汉语化了,
World Bank 世界银行是专用名词.