谁知道这个题目的范文阿？雅思类的，谢谢啦

范文没找到，但发现了作文和别人的修改~

作文:
As the question of studying abroad is discussed, there is much debate as to whether staying at home is more satisfied. However, going abroad to obtain a bachelor's degree can obviously supply more varied experiences, abilities and many other advantages than staying at home to become a common person. Clearly, as our society is going to be a global village, studying overseas in a university is not only benefit for individual, but also helpful for the development of our society.

More experiences can make people become more independent, especially for a student who has been overseas to further his study. He has to learn to cook, wash cloth, pay for the food and the rent by himself when he left his home and his families. He should do everything by his own, no matter in his study or daily life, he must be clear about that there is no more family education or pocket money. Actually, learning leads people to become more erudite and kn