UC知道写一篇英语作文、帮忙看下有语法错误吗。
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大家帮我看一下、
Generally speaking，I think l am much better than before in the study。Although i like to play computers and watch TV, i have you study more hard.I have no time to play because I want to pass into the good high school of our city.
A lot of students hope for the bell ring everyday. But for me, it is a different answer. Every morning I go to school, I will be glad to see my classmates and let me to be fresh and be ready to learn.
Thus, school and classroom become my second home in my life, they provide an opportunity and a place for me to have a quiet enviornment to study.
Though the school life make me tired. I still fell happy!
初三。
不好的地方帮我润色一下！！。。 添加点东西也可以。。
好的我肯定给予大大的加分！！
明早来验收。。
i have to study more hard.
... 能帮忙加点什么或者润色下不、 感觉。。 不是很好嘛...
in the study：in study
play computers :play on computer
i have you study more hard: i have studied much harder than before
pass into: get into
it is a different answer: it's not the case.
let me to be fresh : make me feel refreshed
be ready to learn: be ready for class
school and classroom become: school has become
they provide an opportunity : it offers me a golden opportunity
I still fell happy: I still feel happy.
语法错误太多了，改了一下，这样想进入重点高中，很难
补充：找我的改就不错了，初三就这个水平，再往好里改你们老师就该怀疑了，也要故意买个破绽懂吗
i have you study more hard.这句话是不是打错了？
they provide an opportunity and a place for me to have a quiet enviornment to study。 provide 有后接with和for的两种用法，我记得是provide sth. with sb. 和provide sb. for sth.不知道既没记错，如果没记错，这句话后面应该是用with而不是for你最好再查查。
I still fell happy! 应该是feel而不是fell~~~
其他地方语法上应该没有错误， 句子写的也还可以。