翻译短文,请哪位高手帮忙修改短文!跪求

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Osaka
Osaka is a beautiful city, it is located in Japan's Honshu.Osaka have many scenic spots, most notably is the Osaka Castle. And there have more delicious foods.In April, the Osaka opened full of cherry blossoms, petals dancing wind, it is beautiful.

我想写的是这样的

大阪是一个美丽的城市,它位于日本本州。大阪有很多风景名胜,最著名的是大阪城。那儿还有很多美味的食物。四月里,大阪中开满了樱花。花瓣随风舞动,很是漂亮。

这是我准备演讲的,求求的家帮忙。

第一个have应改成has opened应改成open每年都开樱花
别的翻译的都很好

Osaka is a beauty of city, it is located on Japan origin state.There is a lot of scenery famous spot in Osaka, most Zhao of is city in Osaka.There is also a lot of food of delicacy there.April inside, was filled with a plum flower in Osaka.The flower petal move with the breeze dance, is very beautiful.

Osaka
Osaka is a very beautiful city. It is located in Japan's Honshu and there are many scenic spots. The most notably is the Osaka Castle. There are many delicious foods in Osaka, such as Dakoyaki(章鱼烧)and Okonomiyaki(铁板烧).In April, the Osaka open full of cherry blossoms, the petals dancing in wind, it is beautiful and romance.

Osaka is a very beautiful city. It is located in Japan's Honshu and there are many scenic spots. The most notably is the Osaka Castle. There are many delicious foods in Osaka, such asDakoyakiandOkonomiyakiIn April, the Osaka open full of cherry blossoms, the petals dancing in wind,