UC知道帮我做中学英文作文,谢谢
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我的老师说我写作文很不逻辑,所以拜托帮我看一下我的作文有什么问题The sunshine in the morning was very dazzling,I lied on the bed being unwilling to get up after staling for a long time.I am troubled with a dream that keep going in my mind......I saw a women who dressed in white in my dream,according to my memory her face was rather pale and her skin was truely pure white,a human can't be sooooooooo white and pale,but the problem was this was only a dream,a dream whom was so reality.The white clothes woman opened her mouth and she started to talk.She talked and talked,even she talked until the roof of the world dropped down,I probably still can't understand what she was talked about(it seem liked the dream was a bit weird).Until she finished her last sentence,I FINALLY underst and what she wanted to tell me.She wanted to tell me that I would dead after 24 hours,so I would have 24 hours to do what I wanted(of course I dont believe her,this is only a
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the sunshine in the morning was dazzling,I lied on bed unwilling to get up.I am puzzled by a dream that keeps disturbing my mind...I saw a woman dressed in white whose face was rather pale, and her skin was so pure white that it cannot be a human's. Still, it is only a vivid dream. The woman in white opened her mouth and she started to talk. She was talking until the roof of the world dropped, I couldn't probably understand what she was talking about(it seemed that the dream was a little bit weird). Not until she finished her last word,did I FINALLY got it.She was trying to tell me that I would be killed in 24 hours,so I would only have 24 hours to do what I wanted(of course I don't believe her,this is only a dream)
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（本人大学）
本来就不会 那更要自己写 英语是要靠不断积累的 你现在就算问到了 你自己还不是不会写 晕 现在的孩子！
你只有二十四小时了 还做梦 还不如写写你做了什么有意义的事