UC知道热心动物保护活动，看下这句英文
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I'm also active in participating animal protection movements/activities
通常情况是不是这么写呢？movements还是activities？
有没有更好的写法
I am certainly a dog lover，I had a Pekingese named "snow
bear" when I was in China. I trusted a friend to look after
him before I came to Australia. She's a very kind lady living
in the same community who also has a Pekingese at home. So
when I went back to China for holidays "snow bear" could stay
with me for some days.
I'm also enthusiastic in animal protection movements，if I
live in a house I will certainly adopt a homeless dog or cat.改好是这样的，有问题请指出
通常情况是不是这么写呢？movements还是activities？
有没有更好的写法
I am certainly a dog lover，I had a Pekingese named "snow
bear" when I was in China. I trusted a friend to look after
him before I came to Australia. She's a very kind lady living
in the same community who also has a Pekingese at home. So
when I went back to China for holidays "snow bear" could stay
with me for some days.
I'm also enthusiastic in animal protection movements，if I
live in a house I will certainly adopt a homeless dog or cat.改好是这样的，有问题请指出
I am enthusiastic in animal protection movements. 这样比较好
不要用activities 这个一般指比较小的 比较具体的 活动
I have found a friend to look after him before I came to Australia.
改为
I trusted a friend to look after him before I came to Australia
in the neighborhood
改为
in the same community(小区是community)
"snow bear" can stay with me
改为
could stay with me
some day
改为
some days
I am bound up in animal protection activities.
我的建议是activities.movement是指比较大型的运动，比如五四运动，圈地运动等。activities的规模比较小的活动，因为动物保护体现在时时刻刻，任何一个生活点滴，这应是楼主要表达的意思。