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I went back to Taiwan in the winter vacation, visited relatives and friends and ate a lot of yummy snack. The most exciting event was riding a bicycle with my sister on the longest bridge in my home town.

We set off around 5 o'clock. I sat on the saddle pedaling, my sister on the back, holding the handle for directions. I peddled very hard so we arrived quickly on the bridge. I was exhausted already, so we changed seats, my sister peddled and I sat on the back.

My sister was very fast, we arrived at the other end of the bridge in no time although the bridge was hundreds of meters long.

On the other end, we changed back again. My speed was not high but very steady. We came back in 10 minutes. It was dangerous in the road. There were many vehicles. We could get run over anytime, but we managed to arrive safely after all.
It was a lot of fun riding a bicycle. I shall do it again.

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I went back to Taiwan in the winter vacation, visit their relatives and friends, eat a lot of delicious dessert. The most exciting events is riding a bicycle and my sister on the longest bridge in my hometown. We set about 5 o 'clock. I sat in the saddle pedaling, my sister, holding hands directions. I work very hard, so we arrived on the bridge on delivery. I was tired, so we changed seats, my sister and I sat on the disk. My sister is very fast, we arrived on the other side of the bridge, at any time, although bridge is hundreds of meters long. On the other side, we've changed back. I speed is not high, but very stable. We come back in 10 minutes. It is very dangerous. There are many cars. We can run, but we managed to arrive. This is a very interesting to ride a bicycle. I want to do it again.

went back to Taiwan in the winter vacation, visited relatives and friends and ate a lot of yummy snack. The most exciting event was riding a bicycle with my sister on the long