70分加急！！！英语作文

My father
My mother ever said to me:remember the first day I came to the world ,my father seemed to be the happiest people in the world .Because he knew he would being a father which he dreamed.From that time I became one of the luckiest childred ,because I have a good father .
Now I have grown up .However ,dad has become an old man .He has given her love to me !!!But I only realize this when he has become old!!When I was a little child ,dad alwayse told me a proverb:aim small miss small.At first I don't understang it .but now ,I know ,dad want to tell me no matter I do ,I must try my best and think over and over!!I gratuated to ma father .From now on ,I will give my best wishes to my father :I love you .God bless you and my god bless my family!
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