帮我看看这篇关于魏晨的英语短文有没有错

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/07/02 23:00:46
my favorite film is vision.vision is a person who singing very well.he is a pure person and his smiles make me fell very warm but if he doesn't simle he has a little cool.he will take good care of his fans.for example he will ask his fans study hard.i love he very much and i hope you can love him.

我是要口语考试的，所以帮我看看我找到的这篇文章有没有问题~

my favorite film is vision= my favorite star is vision

vision is a person who singing very well
=vision is a person who sings very well

for example he will ask his fans study hard
=for example he will ask his fans to study hard

i love he very much =.i love him very much

i hope you can love him. = i hope you will love him too.

有点语法错误。 都是楽橙，帮忙这下吧、

i hope you can love him. ???
我认为改成
i hope you will love him too!

fell改成feel.还有he has a little cool改成he is a little cool.还有句子中的小写的i都要改成大写的I。