求SAT作文例子 保底40分 绝对有追加

哈哈。。。我写好了。。。没怎么考虑词汇的问题，但大概就是这样。原意的话还可以再加一个例子咯。
While some people would view that an in depth analysis of our past would restraint our horizons of future, I, being a member of the Asian community, believe that our past not only help us understands our present, but also defines who we are.
Human beings grow through constantly making choices and learning from their mistakes. And understanding the mistake you made was one way to analyze your past, and to move beyond it. One of the basic philosophies of Loyola, the founder of the Jesuit community, was to learn from the mistakes through daily reflection. The early Jesuits came together starting the first Jesuit School in Messia, as they were discovering their mission by doing it, adapting to change, taking risks, and learning by trial and error. One of the three key movements of a Jesuit education is “be reflective”. “What you have done?”, “What was strikes you the most today?” and “What do you see room of improvement within?