UC知道评价英语短文
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I am an ordinary person. Of course, I have one nose and two eyes. It is easy for you to discover it!
I am an ordinary student. From Monday to Friday, I have to go to school as other student. On weekends, I have to go to study something too.
I think I am good at studying, but I’m not good at exam. I seldom get good scores, I often make some small mistakes. Although I seldom good scores, I never give up. I think once I try my best, I will get it repaid. In many ways, I am not the best one, but I never give up. I always try it again and again, when I get in trouble. Finally, I often succeeded.
Never give up, this is me.
Never give up, I am who I am!
现在怎么样？………………
I am an ordinary person. Of course, I have one nose and two eyes. It is easy for you to discover it!
I am an ordinary student. From Monday to Friday, I have to go to school as other student.
I am good at studying, but I’m not good at exam. I seldom get good
内容评论：空洞，口号太多。废话不少。逻辑错误很多。
即使语言没有任何错误，也只能拿及格分（在中国），在国外，不及格。
am an ordinary person. Of course, I have one nose and two eyes. It is easy for you to discover it!
没有说清楚的你的特征。最后一句和上文没有逻辑关系。
I am an ordinary student. From Monday to Friday, I have to go to school as other studentS. On weekends, I have to go to study something too.
周末学什么？没说。
I think I am good at studying,没有这个说法的 but I’m not good at exam. I seldom get good scores, I often make some small mistakes. Although I seldom good scores, I never give up. I think once I try my best, I will get it repaid. In many ways, I am not the best one, but I never give up. I always try it 指代不明again and again, when I get in trouble. Finally, I often succeeded. 时态不对
Never give up, this is me.
Never give up, I am who I am!
口号喊得很响。
建议：推倒重来
口号太多。废话不少。逻辑错误很多。