UC知道请帮忙修改一篇英文作文
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Saturday June 12th Cloudy
Today I read something about Hong Zhanhui online.He was born in 1982 in a poor family in Xihua County.His father was badly ill and his mother has left home.So everything hard fell onto the young boys shoulders.But Hong Zhanhui faced difficulties by himself.and has been a hero on people's eyes.
I studied a lot in his story.He studied hard and he was good for his family too.I don't think I often think of my parents.I dan't study very hard too.I felt very guilty.
I'll pay much time for study and I won't quarrel with my parents in the future.I'll gro up from boy to man.
我知道我语法不好，希望能仔细帮我修改！分可以加。
Today I read something about Hong Zhanhui online.He was born in 1982 in a poor family in Xihua County.His father was badly ill and his mother has left home.So everything hard fell onto the young boys shoulders.But Hong Zhanhui faced difficulties by himself.and has been a hero on people's eyes.
I studied a lot in his story.He studied hard and he was good for his family too.I don't think I often think of my parents.I dan't study very hard too.I felt very guilty.
I'll pay much time for study and I won't quarrel with my parents in the future.I'll gro up from boy to man.
我知道我语法不好，希望能仔细帮我修改！分可以加。
boys改为boy's,on people's eyes的on改为in，I don't study very hard too中too改为either,pay much time for study 中for改为on,最后 in the future中要去掉the,因为是指从今以后
I dan't study very hard too.I felt very guilty. 错误单词个don't or can't
boys改为boy's,on people's eyes的on改为in，I don't study very hard too中too改为either,pay much time for study 中for改为onI dan't study very hard too.I felt very guilty. 错误单词个don't or can't in 1982 in改一改，好像只错着