UC知道英语棒的进来帮我看看我写的自我介绍要得不
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我要参加比赛啦 可千万不能出现语法错误啊~~
如下：
Dear uncle and aunt ,good afternoon .At the first ,let me introduction my self .My name is Yeyu Xuan .you can call me AngeI because I like the pure, and flying in the sky. I am 13 years old this .So I feel I have grown up.
I like many things,such as badminton,table tennis,,books and so on.My best food is the candy, because it can make you drown into its sweetness. And my favourite colour is blue and white because they can give you a feeling of freshment. I have two different characters, Sometimes quiet, sometimes lively.
I love English so much .so I am very happy to join this English style contest.. Fighting !
如下：
Dear uncle and aunt ,good afternoon .At the first ,let me introduction my self .My name is Yeyu Xuan .you can call me AngeI because I like the pure, and flying in the sky. I am 13 years old this .So I feel I have grown up.
I like many things,such as badminton,table tennis,,books and so on.My best food is the candy, because it can make you drown into its sweetness. And my favourite colour is blue and white because they can give you a feeling of freshment. I have two different characters, Sometimes quiet, sometimes lively.
I love English so much .so I am very happy to join this English style contest.. Fighting !
Dear uncle and aunt,good afternoon.At first,let me introduce myself.My name is Yeyuxuan.You can call me Angel because I like the purity,and flying in the sky.I am 13 years old.So I feel I have grown up.I like many things,such as bad minton,table tennis,books and so on.My favorate food is the candy,because it can make you drown into sweetness.I have two different characters,sometimes quiet,sometimes lively.I love English so I am very happy to join this English style contest..Fighting!
这是修改好的版本