帮忙翻译一段简单的文字哦。拒绝翻译软件。谢谢。可以加分哦。

I gratuated in management in July,2008. Although the grade was not as good as expected, I have been interested in this major and would like to apply related jobs. If luckily I beome your employee, I will finish my work at greatest effort. As for work experience, I did sale in my part time. With the greatest sincereness, I hope I can get the job and contribute to your company.

抱歉没有逐词翻译。 若是作为外企的应聘材料，我个人认为你的原文在很多地方还需要改进。例如， “如果有幸能受聘 我将全力以赴完成工作任务”。我想，完成岗位工作是最基本的要求吧，这并不是公司聘用你的期望。

我翻译的过程中感到你使用的是I- attitude, not You-attitude, which is basic for applying a job.

应聘的时候，像这种商业文涵，最好简明扼要，忌长篇大论，而没有point。

I graduated from the university in July ,2008.I am major in management, but my academic achievement is not satisfactory. However ,I take a fency to my major and I am so glad as well as honored to be here to apply this job.
If I am fortuned enough to be applied,I will put all my efforts into completing my tasks.
As for working experience,I have only