急求一篇英文作文关于学生part time job 的看法

On Part-time Job

We are no longer freshmen in college now. Recenly,a large quantity of us choose to run a part-time job. As to the stylish and crazy thing,on one hand,it shows that,to some degree,we are more independent than what we are before. On the other hand, however, many disadvantages come flooding to us, which even lead to a slump in our study and daily life.
To begin with,we benefit from what we do in part-time. The reason why we call it “part” is all because we do have plenty of free time. It is believed that most students don’t know how to use their spare time. Then,making your time which is just simply used to sleep into a part-time job,indeed,is truly a good way to enjoy the college life. Since when you sleep or hang out,the priceless time pass by. While if you do a part-time job,say,being a tutor,you can learn how to teach all by yourself ,to review your old-day lessons as well. In that way,who won’t admit it a good method to pick up?
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