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This term students need to do a brilliant presentation about their business if they want to pass this module, because of there is no test at the end. This is a new idea of study a subject to me. To my point of view, no test may easier for me to pass. But Things a not happen the same as what I think. To work as a team is very difficult to me.
We come up ideas about the business that we are going to set up. At first, we have not taken it serious. Everyone talk in a free and easy atmosphere. But when we notice its importance, just one or two of our members are actually thinking. Obviously, the work is the work. We cannot escape it. After several after-class short discusses, we decide to open a bakery shop in Nottingham. As a group leader, I am not very confident with my English. Although I tried to arrange the time, but people always tell me they d not have time. What I done was tell others cancel the meeting, and tell them what to do. After that, we hand in our work without discuss

This term students need to make a brilliant presentation concerning their business if they want to pass this module, because there is no final exam. This is a new idea of studying this subject to me. From my point of view, no test may make it easier to pass. But things didn't happen as i thought. To work as a team is very difficult to me.
We came up with ideas about the business that we were going to set up. At first, we didn't take it seriously. Everyone talked in a free and easy atmosphere. But when we noticed its importance, only one or two of our members were actually giving it some thoughts. Obviously, work is work. We cannot escape. After several sessions of short after-class discussion, we decided to open a bakery shop in Nottingham. As the group leader, I am not very confident in my English. Although I tried to set the time, but people always told me they didn't have time. What I did was telling others we had to cancel the meeting, and telling them what to