UC知道英语高手进来...底分50，追加50
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I’m glad that I’ll be in your family soon.fist,I’d like to introduce myself and my family to you.
My name is selina,my Chinese name is 张潇月.I’m a girl.I’m 13. There are four people in my family :mother,father, a little sister and me.my sister is 8.she is cute.My father is smart,he is an engineer.My mother is beautiful,she likes to by some clothes.We are happy every day. I often travel with my family .I like doing some interesting things:have a trip,play computer games,read books,shopping,singing and dancing.I like American.I think America People is friendly to Chinese. I think going to America can broaden our vision and learn more knowledge. I appreciate that you accept and regard me as a member of your family. I believe that we can get along very well.
高手们帮我看看有什么错的地方哦，并帮我修改一下...小妹我英语不好...恳请朋友们帮助~·
fist拼写错了，应该是first；
My name is selina,应该写My English name is selina更好些；
a little sister -little sister;
she likes to by some clothes.-she likes to buy some clothes;
have a trip,play computer games,read books-having a trip,playing computer games,reading books;
I think America People is friendly to Chinese.- I think American people are friendly to Chinese;
I like doing some interesting things:have a trip,play computer games,read books,shopping,singing and dancing.这里应该都用动名词，前后一致
I think America People is friendly to Chinese.用复数are。America People最好用American。
I think going to America can broaden our vision and learn more knowled这里主谓不太一致
she likes to by some clothes...
by=buy
亲爱的朋友,
很高兴我迟一点就会到你家,首先,我想介绍一下我和我的家人给你认识.
我叫Selina, 我的中文名字是张潇月(zhang,xiaoyue).我是一个13岁的女孩. 我家里有4个成员,妈妈爸爸,我和我妹. 我妹她今年8岁,她很可爱.我爸爸很聪明,他是一个工程师. 我妈妈很美丽. 她喜欢买衣服.我们每天都过得很开心. 我经常和我的家人去旅行. 我喜欢做些有趣的事情,例如旅行,玩电脑游戏,看书,购物,唱歌和跳舞. 我喜欢美国人,我想美国人对中国人很友好. 我想去美国可以开阔我的视野和学多点