求英语高手帮我改英文作文!紧!

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Dear.Shen yongming,
Today,we watched a Cartoon called Ratatouille.The story talks about that A rat named Remy dreams of becoming a great French chef despite his family's wishes and the obvious problem of being a rat in a decidedly rodent-phobic profession.
In the end ,Remy chang his life
After the cartoon .I won't forget the way Remy're dointg.The feeling's so strong were lasting for so long .there is something left in my head .
Now i`ll just write myself a feeling about <Ratatouille> that goes like this,
In my opinion,i think that the music in the <Ratatouille> is very beautiful and the picture is pretty good!
I also think Remy is very cute, i do love it.Now i think Remy is a hero in my life! For example:Remy said: I've always believed with hard work and a little bit of luck, it's only a matter of time before I'm discovered! It move to me so strong! after that , i feel hopeful! and i also think i w

Dear.Shen yongming,
Today,we watched a Cartoon called Ratatouille.The story talks about a rat named Remy who dreams of becoming a great French chef despite his family's wishes and the obvious problem of being a rat in a decidedly rodent-phobic profession.
In the end ,Remy changed his life.
After watching the cartoon .I won't forget what Remy achieved.The feeling's so strong and lasts for so long.There is something left in my head .
Now i`ll just write my own feelings about <Ratatouille>
In my opinion,i think that the music in the <Ratatouille> is very beautiful and the filn quality is pretty good!
I also think Remy is very cute, I do love him.Now I think Remy is a hero in my life! For example,Remy said "I've always believed with hard work and a little bit of luck, it's only a matter of time before I'm discovered!" It moved to me so strongly! After that , I felt hopeful, and I also think I can be succe