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In “The Disaster That Wasn’t: The Great Planetary Alignment of 2000”, some theorists, like Richard Noone, author of “5/5/2000 Ice: The Ultimate Disaster”, as well as Gribbin and Plagemann, authors of “The Jupiter Effect and Beyond the Jupiter Effect”(both best-sellers) came out a pseudo-scientific theory, “The Grand Conjunction” or “The Grand Alignment”. This theory says that when the planets line up next to each other, the combined gravitational pull will knock the Earth of its axis, cause tidal waves, earthquakes, and the end of the world as we know it. However, the truth wasn’t as they said. According to Philip C. Plait, he states that “Despite the old saying, size doesn’t matter; distance does.” In other words, the mass of all planets line up next to each other don’t have too much impact on earth, however, the distance does. For example, the moon has some impacts on Earth even though it has a very small mass. The alignment theorists tried to omit the part which about the gravity is

knock the Earth of its axis, cause tidal waves改成causing
the mass of all planets line up next to each other改成lining
part which about the gravity is a 改成part that the gravity is affected by distance
has been many authors tried to 改成Many authors have been trying,尽量少用there has been,这个句型不好用。however删除，不能和Although一起用
Medias are more likely interest in pseudoscience because these beliefs are the gold mines改成likely to have interest in,the删除
That is the how the删除
个人感觉时态一般现在时和过去时很混乱，肯定有错的地方，left out the part that goes against them应该是went但不知道你们这种科学论文应该用什么，你自己再改吧

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In “The Disaster That Wasn’t: The Great Planetary Alignment of 2000”, some theorists, like Richard Noone, author of “5/5/2000 Ice: The Ultimate Disaster”, as well as Gribbin and Plagemann, authors of “The Jupiter Effect and Beyond the Jupiter Effect”(both best-sellers) came out 一 a pseudo-scientific theory, “The Grand Conjunction” or “The Grand Alignment”. This theory says that when the plan