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I am very glad to be here to introduce myself.My name is Wang **,but you can also call me Wang Tao. I am 21 years old .I come from LinYin , a very beautiful city in Shandong province. I will receive my bachelor degree after my graduation in june in **University,and my major is Science of biology,whitch I am very interested in.
Generally speaking ,I am a hard working student , even though my score is not very good. In the past 4 years,I spend most of my time on study and I have passed CET6,my defects is that I haven’t pass the computer level 2 exam,but my general operation of the computer very skilled and I will try my best to study it.My classmates think that I am a smart person with self-confidence,persistence of everything.
My family always want me to become a teather,yeah,teathing is a good job,but I want to make my life colorful and I want to learn some useful knowledge in my real life. I think your school can make my dream become the truth and your school does have u

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I am very glad to be here to introduce myself. My name is Wang **,but you can also call me Wang Tao. I am 21 years old .I come from LinYin, a very beautiful city in Shandong province. I will receive my bachelor`s degree after my graduation from **University in june ,and my major is Science * Biology (Biomedical Sciences) ,whitch I am very interested in.
Generally speaking ,I am a hard working student , even though my score is not very high. In the past 4 years,I had spend most of my time on study and I have passed CET6,my defect is that I haven’t passed the computer level 2 exam,but I am skilled in general operation of the computer and I will try my best to learn it.My classmates always say that I am a smart person with self-confidence and persistence .
My family always want me to become a teather.Although teathing is a good job, I want to make my life more colorful .So I want to learn some more useful knowledge in my life. I think your school can realise my dr