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Internet is playing an important role in our daily life nowadays. Just as a coin has two sides, internet also has both advantages and shortcomings.
网络现在在我们的日常生活中发挥着越来越重要的作用。就像一个硬币有两面，网络也有它的利与弊。
Let’s look at the advantages first. Many of us send emails on the net to keep in touch with others. We can read newspapers and magazines or even enjoy movies on line without leaving our home. We may use the internet to play games for recreation. To conclude, internet has become a part of our life.
让我们先看看益处。我们中的许多人都在网上发邮件以和他人保持练习。我们不用出门就可以在线看报纸杂志。我们利用网络玩游戏以作娱乐。总之，网络已经成了我们生活的一部分。
There are three points in the disadvantages of internet. Firstly, internet is very addictive and many school children are hooked on it.Secondly, people's privacy is easily violated on the Internet.Thirdly, junk emails are pouring into our email boxes daily.
网络有三点不利之处。第一，网络容易上瘾，而且很多学生都沉迷于其中。第二，在网上人们的隐私很容易遭到侵犯。第三，垃圾邮件每天都充斥这我们的邮箱。
However, I think the fault is not internet itself, but