UC知道请帮忙改改语法等，很急，十分感谢
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Dazhan Institute Of Electromechanical Technology was founded in 1992, and located in Baijia Lake science and technology industrial park in Jiangning, it is a high-tech enterprise gathering in research, production and sales, specializing in the DTA, DSC, oxygen bomb calorimeter, automatic calorimeter, physical and chemistry laboratory instruments of collage, our products are widely used in electric power, coal, paper, petrochemicals, agriculture and animal husbandry, medicine, scientific research, teaching and other fields, get unanimous praise by many users.
To meet the needs of our customers as our own duty, we built a team with high quality and efficiency of scientific research by virtue of a solid strong technical force, a serious attitude of rigorous scientific research, sound development strategy. Our technical experts and engineers provide customers with comprehensive technical support after-sales and pre-sales from technical advisory to technical training, from produ
To meet the needs of our customers as our own duty, we built a team with high quality and efficiency of scientific research by virtue of a solid strong technical force, a serious attitude of rigorous scientific research, sound development strategy. Our technical experts and engineers provide customers with comprehensive technical support after-sales and pre-sales from technical advisory to technical training, from produ
1.第一段末尾get改为getting
2.getting unanimous praise from many users
3.第二段开头we built a team of high quality and efficiency of scientific research，attitude后最后改成towards
4.第二段末 After ten years of development, "Dazhan" has became one of the well-known brands in the industry.
5.We are always in an invincible position in the fierce market competition by developing new products continuously
我只发现这几处比较明显的