急求专业的翻译（不要机翻的）很重要啊

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中国美学以含蓄为美，重主观印象。这种美学标准表现出注重平衡，协调，融合的审美特征。表现在语言上就是讲求音韵和谐，形式对称，用词空泛含蓄，具有强烈的主观色彩。而西方美学的最高境界就是“照事物应有的样子去模仿。”这种审美观表现在语言形式上就形成了用词简洁明快，句式结构严谨的特点。这样审美心理的不同表现在语气的各个层面，特别表现在修饰词，四字词组和形象等的使用频率上。例如：日光灯齐放光华，闪烁迷离．和水中倒影连成一片。漂灯点缀河面，似万点繁星坠落人间。[1] （p202） These myriad一1ighted boats become a riotof color which blend most subtly with colors from the river’s sreflected surface．由于中国美学中重主观色彩，写景状物不拘泥于事物的表层现象，而要虚实结合，创造一种意境。汉语中常用华丽的词语来烘托气氛，渲染感情，而不是为了表达具体意义。这种用词习惯在中国读者心中能唤起美的感受。但由于中西审美心理的不同，外国读者往往会有一种堆砌、浮夸的感觉。所以，汉英翻译时应该顺应英语读者的审美观，去掉那些不必要的修饰语，使译文简洁明快。因此，翻译时就弱化一些修饰语如“齐放光华，闪烁迷离”、“点缀河面，似万点繁星坠落人间”，改用一些朴素自然的词语如”a riot of color”，并且省略一些修饰词。如原文的“闪烁迷离”、“似万点繁星”都被省略了.

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