你是我血液里流动的生命 怎么翻译

You have become the life flowing in my veins.

这才是英语的表达方式：
你已经成为我血管里流淌着的血液。

有时翻译如果完全按照中文，翻译出来的东西也就成了只有中国人能看懂的中式英语了。
You have become blood flowing in my veins.
这样比前面的更好一些

You are flowing life in my blood.

You are the life that flowing in my blood.