麻烦给看一下这篇文章有没有语法错误 谢谢~

有些地方不懂你想表达什么，只能改成这样，将就下吧
In my opinion, love is everywhere, whether in reality or network, there is love. But different people have different opinions about love; the key point to love is mainly to see how you treat it. I think to love a person have to trust each other and mutual understanding, to respect each other's thoughts and differences. Someone says that love is not forever, but I don’t think so. We have a long time to love, because we can protect our loves, just like Vingo's wife in the text. She is a nice woman, when her husband was in jail, she didn’t give up, and brought up their children by herself. I think we can use one word to describe her -- great. And from these, we can recognize how great their love is. So I think the true love is never give up.

你是什么学历啊 能写出这样的文章。多用从句别加那么多逗号，换几个从句，这种文章不会打高分。除非是报告

有错误，这应该是用机器翻译的吧。