UC知道英语的 看一下有没有错误
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Good evening, everyone!
I’m glad to stand here and introduce myself briefly. My name is Wang Yao. And my English name is Shirley. I study in Hangzhou Entel Foreign Language School. I have lots of hobbies, and I also grated in many ways. For example, I like to play the piano, dance, speak English and so on.
I am a happy girl. You can always see the smile on my face. And I have a far-reaching dream, to be a diplomat.
I was born in a beautiful town. It was called “De Qing”. It’s a land of fish and rice. It’s a good place to spend summer holidays. Especially Mogan Mountain. It’s cool and comfortable in summer. So，welcome to my hometown!
That’s all. Thank you !
I’m glad to stand here and introduce myself briefly. My name is Wang Yao. And my English name is Shirley. I study in Hangzhou Entel Foreign Language School. I have lots of hobbies, and I also grated in many ways. For example, I like to play the piano, dance, speak English and so on.
I am a happy girl. You can always see the smile on my face. And I have a far-reaching dream, to be a diplomat.
I was born in a beautiful town. It was called “De Qing”. It’s a land of fish and rice. It’s a good place to spend summer holidays. Especially Mogan Mountain. It’s cool and comfortable in summer. So，welcome to my hometown!
That’s all. Thank you !
德清？ 桐乡那块对伐 我去过- -一次
Im glad standing here and to introduce myself。
Hangzhou Entel Foreign Language School 感觉硬翻了
I have lots of hobbies, such as playing the piano, dancing, speaking English and so on. And I also good at those things.
It’s a land of fish and rice 鱼米之乡是吧 但是不应该这麼翻译 感觉就错了It’s a good place to for summer holidays there
the wheather there is very cool and comfortable in summer
welcome to my hometown! 应该最开始说
以i为主语开头的句子太多，出生应该放前边吧
没错吧