一篇英文小记,麻烦帮我看一下有没有错误

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When you're a little boy, you,re very naughty.Though sometimes everyone gets fed up with you, you're lovely beacuse a little child should be what mostly people think that it is .

When you had grow up ,you beacome a rebel .Like other rebels,you have been turning a deaf ear to your parents.I wonder what is in your mind? In fact , i long to konw you.

A few days ago , you left home .Everyone is worried about you whether you know.Why did you do? You said you want to live for yourself; as long as you,re happy yourself , everything is not important .Really? Nothing important? I wonder what is in your mind? I can,t get it .

You're not a boy any longer.You

When you're a little boy, you,re very naughty.Though sometimes everyone gets fed up with you, you're lovely because a little child should be what mostly people think that it is .

When you grew up ,you became a rebel .Like other rebels,you have been turning a deaf ear to your parents.I wonder what is in your mind? In fact , I long to konw you.

A few days ago , you left home .Everyone is worried about you whether you know or not.Why did you do it? You said you want to live for yourself; as long as you,re happy yourself , everything is not important .Really? Nothing important? I wonder what is it in your mind? I can,t get it .

You're not a boy any longer.You have your own views about things around you , but I ,m scared that you get lost .