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Today, my friend gave me an apple and a banana.I said thank you to him.(I thanked him).After a while my friend gave me one cigarette. I said that I have given up smoking for a long time.(不过用过去式应该也可以)He looks a little sad.Yes! I never do things that I like to do.
Although I know that is wrong.

Today, my friend gave me an apple and a banana. I said thank you to him. After a while, my friend gave me one cigarette. I said that I had stoped smoking for a long time. He looked sad. Right! I never do things that I like, even if I knew that is wrong.

Today a friend sent me an apple and a banana. I told him I would like to thank the sentence. After a while, my friend gave me a cigarette, I said I had to quit a long time. He looked sad advantages. Yes. Not like I have never done. Even though I know this is wrong.

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Today the friend gives me an apple and a banana. I said to him thanks. Crossed a meeting, my friend has given me a cigarette, I said that