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Hospital informationization construction's thorough, the electronic medical record's implementation will become finally inevitably, the perfect electronic medical record manufacture and the management standard and will make the related law, will be advantageous to the safeguard electron medical record healthy development, to will raise the overall medical level, the impetus clinical research and so on to have the great significance. How therefore to enable the electronic medical record the use to protect the medical trouble both sides legitimate rights and interests, has become in our country electron medical record legislation the major issue. Along with the electronic medical record use scope's expansion, the question which will bring will be more. The electronic medical record needs the networking operation, along with the browsing object scope's expansion, whether patient's privacy to obtain the protection to become one of question