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Last week,we were learned the text that Learning Chinese-style,from the next I got in the difference between Chinese and American ideas of education.
Where I did not learned the text before,I know about little the difference,however the text throw light on Chinese and American ideas of education exist a lot of difference .
In the Anerican ,the people were encouraged to children to exploratory and having a good time ,two activies that did matter to them.But the critical point was that ,in the process they were trying to teach their children that one can solve a problem effectively by oneself,thus they were to learned to think for oneself ,to solve problem on ones own ,even to discover new problems for which creative solutions are wanted .
In the process ,they are promote creativity .When they wanted his children do something for example painting flower fish and animal ,drawing calligrapher ,opening the door ang so on ,they would usually fail,but they are not bot

你最好给个中文意思,我从你的文字里弄不清楚你要表达什么意思,没办法改!下面是大致修改后的
Last week,we have learned the text Learning Chinese-style. From the next I know the differences between Chinese and American educational ideas .
Before I learned the text,I know little about these differences. However the text throw light on Chinese and American ideas of education exist a lot of difference .
In Anerican, people were encouraged to exploratory children on having a good time. There are two activies that do matter to them.But the critical point was that they were trying to teach their children how to solve a problem effectively by themselves, thus they will learned to think by themselves and to solve problems by themselves ,even to discover new problems for which creative solutions are needed.
In the process of promoteing creativity, when they want their children do something for example painting flowers, animals ,drawing calligrapher ,opening the door and so on ,they would usually fail,but they are not