求英语汉译英，谢谢大伙了！！！！万分感谢

1)Success are not prepared for those who never work hard.（这句这样表达更地道，更流畅）

2)It seems that the story you download from the Internet is an abridged edition.（定语从句，省略了that）

3)In my perspective of view,no one in the world would suffer from cold and stavation if the money was delivered more resonably.（此处注意一定要用would 和 was，因为是虚拟语气，与事实相反的，现在的财富并没有更好的分配）

4)The pictures that Mary added to her website did caught the attention of the visitors'.

5)The body disability didn't stop Lasa from becoming a criticism author of baseball.（stop Sb. from doing Sth.就是阻拦，挡路的意思，如果非要翻译成什么block the way of，是非常白痴的，非常chenglish
的）

我英语很好的，相信我吧 ^_^祝你英语成绩更上一层楼！

1\people who don't pan to work hard can't make success.
2\it seems that the story you downloaded from the internet is an abbreviation version of the original.
3\i belive there would be no starvation in the world if all fortune was allocated in more reasonal mann